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Post  Sue McDonald on Mon Nov 07 2011, 16:54

Rows of people clapping
at the kitten as he dances
to the music in his headphones
lost in vibrating music trances

Theres a little critter watching
laying in someones hand
''look at him'' the critter say's
''he's listening to'Bla Bla' band''

The bears can hear the music
as they stand on tippy toes
looking through car window
where the radios playing same noise

The little boy was dancing
all innocent and nude
when suddenly the coldness
to his bladder did intrude

The mother who was watching
gave a silent smile and sigh
as the child she had raised
reached for the handle high

All around music of nature
critters kitten bears and child
and the cutest little butterfly
flew past grand old tree with style



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Post  RichieO on Thu Nov 10 2011, 01:49

That was a very nice poem Sue, nice to know the little critters can have fun. Good writing. Like Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven
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