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Post  peewee on Wed Nov 09 2011, 14:23

Open the window






Wish I could open this window
Its bloomin hot in here
Could go a glass of water
Even better a glass of beer

Been here over an hour
My skin is feeling quite dry
Wish I could open the window
Before I start to fry

People keep on walking past
Its as if they just don’t care
Why don’t they open the window
It drives me to despair

I’m really getting fed up
Sitting here half the day
They turn up look in the window
And then they go away

At last they’ve opened the window
Thanks guys you saved my life
Hay what you doing with that fork
And be careful with that knife





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Post  Jenna French on Wed Nov 09 2011, 14:56

love it xx
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Post  jinettyx on Wed Nov 09 2011, 15:18

Whooops!..I thought you were a fly when I read this until I saw the piccy of the poor old roast chicken!.......very, very good my old son!! clapping
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Re: Open the window

Post  peewee on Wed Nov 09 2011, 15:20

I like to keep'm guessing lol

Ha what happened to your prompt message me
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Post  RichieO on Thu Nov 10 2011, 01:58

Hey Pete, you should have taken off the skin...then you would have been 'AL-WHITE' on the night.....
Love the poem and the idea a chicken can get hot under the skin... Like clapping
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Post  Lucie on Thu Nov 10 2011, 12:23

Great Banging poem..I thought a sausage in the oven on FB notes( only place i can get to mostly..)
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Post  BC Williams on Thu Nov 10 2011, 18:39

Adorable! Reminds me of some of those adds with talking eggs and what not:-) Very cute Peter!

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Post  Sue McDonald on Thu Nov 10 2011, 19:37

Very good Pete....very very good !!!! red star red star red star
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Post  Sue McDonald on Thu Nov 10 2011, 19:38

Very good Pete....very very good !!!! red star red star red star
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Post  Dori on Fri Nov 11 2011, 08:46

ha ha, I thought it was one of the residents you help take care of doh .....EXCELLENT poem Mr. Peter, you sure do keep us guessing !

Love it Like Like Like a Star @ heaven
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