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Post  Jenna French on Thu Nov 17 2011, 08:00

Just one smile a glance my way or even a single touch, is my heart asking for to much?
One single touch upon my skin, did we start something that should not begin?
Your lips so soft pressed against mine, was it a case of wrong place wrong time?
Why did it have to stop now? was it because in not what you want not then not now?
If things were different would you want me? are you blind to my fantasy?
I would never tell your secrets to a soul and you know, so why let me go?
In my heart I know the reasons why, so am I a fool for wanting to cry?
Your touch sends me totally wild, I tell you these to release them so now where will they hide?
Our secret in our hearts and minds I want to thank you for what we had and being so kind

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Post  peewee on Thu Nov 17 2011, 09:32

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Re: lost love

Post  jinettyx on Fri Nov 18 2011, 06:12

Very well written Jenna.... Like
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Post  Dori on Fri Nov 18 2011, 07:33

I second with Peter
Peter said : Very touching poem
and Jinn
Jinn said: Very well written Jenny
. keep up with the great writing and expressing yourself.
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Post  BC Williams on Fri Nov 18 2011, 14:57

Ooooo intrigue at it's best! Good writing Jenna . . .

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Post  Lucie on Sun Nov 20 2011, 02:22

jenna, your thoughts and feelings just pour over a page, it's so naturally beautiful i love reading your heartfelt poetry
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Post  Jenna French on Sun Nov 20 2011, 08:33

thank you all so much xxxxxx
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Post  Little Owl on Wed Apr 04 2012, 06:09

I would have to agree with all the above.

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