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Post  Sue McDonald on Sun Dec 04 2011, 19:42

A message on the screen, sat there for a while
could not believe the words, my mind just walked for miles
along the river strolling, tears in my eyes
not knowing how to help you, just staring at the sky.

I hear the water lapping as my mind is running fast,
feel the moisture underfoot the coolness from the grass.
There's not much I can do, to ease the path you have
except write this little poem with some words to comfort you.

If your worried ring my phone, I can talk from dusk to dawn
thats something we've in common, we can make each other yawn !
If your lonely stroll with me along the banks of the river,
in the shade of the willow trees, feel the rivers calming breeze.

Or along our sun kissed beaches, hear the power of the waves
capture the strength of the ocean,to help you remain brave.
Feel the sand on your toes, the coolness on your skin
embrase the love around you, know that you will win !

If your trembling with fear, coz your scared of what you'll hear
I'll hold your hand so tight, to squeeze away the fright.
If your sad, just let it out, cry, scream or shout !
I'll be there holding tissues, I'll make sure you won't run out...

Stay strong know I am here, morning, noon and night
Wish there was more that I could do, to sort of make it all alright
Your loved more than you know, by your family friends and more
Your that loving kind of person that everyone should know....

At your appointment tomorrow,
my heart and soul will be there
giving you my strength and support
as a friend please know I care ....xxxxx



©by Sue McDonald ........writen for a special friend with love 05/12/12

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Post  Lucie on Mon Dec 05 2011, 00:12

absolutely remarkable, wonderful, heartfelt warmth.
Sue you truly have inspirational words of hope and support.
Love this message
and my love to all the 'Maria's' of this world x
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Post  peewee on Mon Dec 05 2011, 03:41

Like Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like
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Post  RichieO on Tue Dec 06 2011, 16:44

Thats was an outstanding poem Sue well written and from the heart. You have a very caring warm hearted nature to give sucha supportive poem. Well done.... Like Like Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven BIG hug give flowers
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Post  BC Williams on Wed Dec 07 2011, 20:31

If your lonely stroll with me along the banks of the river,
in the shade of the willow trees, feel the rivers calming breeze.
Too, too beautiful!

Hugs Sue:-)

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Post  Sue McDonald on Thu Dec 08 2011, 00:01

Thankyou so much everyone ...A friend of mine was diagnosed with breast cancer last Fri.....I felt so helpless ....this was my way of letting her know I'm always here !!!! Very very sad though .....
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Post  Dori on Thu Dec 08 2011, 08:27

WOW !
Like Like Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven clapping

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Post  jinettyx on Thu Dec 08 2011, 15:07

Sue... what a truely beautiful and special person you are!
heart heart heart heart heart heart heart
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