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Post  Fred West on Fri Jan 13 2012, 07:20

A wonderful place

You want to do things that you do,

But things seem to go away and never to appear,

You will visit your friend down the road today,

But at the end of the day the thought has gone away and never to return.

You mean to put the picture on the wall,

Someone speaks and it’s gone that is all,

The wall stays bare and your thought is gone

Another day another thought some get done and some just nought,

The mind is such a wonderful place; we put thoughts in boxes so we do not see

But they are there for just you and me,

Put a thought in a locked up box, and throw away the key,

That is what some thoughts are for just nasty and bad so lock them up

Other thoughts are to dwell upon, the curves the way things fit,

But they are precious just for me,

Your own thoughts never see the light of day,

Some you have you throw away, did you hear...

No I did not and do not want to, go away..Forget it and lock it throw away the key

That is best for some thoughts well it is for me

A sunset reminds me of home and growing up

When your dad gave you the first ever pup,

Collie dog sable and white, your companion your 15 years.

Some memories stay on the mantelpiece of your mind,

There to be enjoyed every time you go by,

Every thought has its place and every place becomes a thought in the

Wonderful place we call our mind.

©Fred West 2012
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Post  BC Williams on Fri Jan 13 2012, 09:46

Very good writing Fred. It's as if you're writing off the top of the mind (which I know you do:-) but most folks find it challenging to do this so well. It's comfortable . . ..

As for the content it may need to be your new way and you'll need to roll with it. Stress is the enemy of clearer thoughts. You know we are all behind you, don't you? I wish I could give you a big hug and tell you I except you just the way you are, and I do.

As for the hug . . . hug

Love ya Fred!

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Post  Lucie on Fri Jan 13 2012, 11:10

Fred you amaze me how you can set to print just how you feel, and you tell it so well...
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Post  Fred West on Fri Jan 13 2012, 11:14

thank you
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Post  Cheryl Brickner on Mon Jan 16 2012, 11:10

Fred,
Good writing! Yes, the mind is a wonderful place and a mystery too!
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