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Post  RichieO on Wed Jan 18 2012, 17:33

Dawn

Dawn, it breaks
Across a the sky
So slowly it raises
It head to shed
New light this day

Dawn, the start of
A new unborn day
Untouched by the
Hand of man
Awaits its new fate

Dawn, the raising
Of the sun so red
bright and crimson
Is born and bred
New life is fed by
This crimson red.

Dawn, so innocent
So pure in its light
brings a new day.
The sun slowly rises
burning off the
Early morning mists.

Dawn, it’s mystery
Softens the night
Into the morning light
The horrors of darkness
Are lost to lightness
Of a new born sun.
Take heed and believe
In this new day to bring
Happiness and joy for you.




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Post  jinettyx on Thu Jan 19 2012, 07:37

Very very nice Richard....I have seen many new sun rises and each one I think is more spectacular to the eye.... very good writing hunni...xx sunny Tis a beautiful start to a new day. sunny
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Post  Lucie on Sat Jan 21 2012, 07:33

nice one treacle, i do love watching the skies.....
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Post  Cheryl Brickner on Sat Jan 21 2012, 10:34

What a beautiful poem of God's perfect creation of the skies so beautiful at dawn!
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Post  Little Owl on Tue Apr 03 2012, 07:07

There is nothing like a new day dawning. Mornings are my favorite time of the day everything fresh and new. I like your poem.

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