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Quiet Time ? !

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Quiet Time ? !

Post  Sue McDonald on Tue Jan 24 2012, 07:08

Monday before the wedding
quite time for me....
yet running around inside my head
are the visions that I see

Summer sun kissing golden sand
creating a haze so bright
gentle waves break along the shore
creating a beautiful sight

Emerging through the rays and spray
engulfed in her own dreamy haze
is a vision of love created from love
then blessed from heaven above

Our daughter, eyes as blue as the sea
walking arm in arm with her dad
the sun that shines kissing her cheeks
as a breeze tossled curls around her head

The vision had been in my mind before
as we watched her aged four on the beach
digging away with her bucket and spade
her wedding day far out of reach

As I sit with these mingling thoughts in my mind
feel so proud of her person and being
from buckets and spades bunches and braides
to a wedding day planned with such feeling

May the sun shine remain not to hot or much rain
may her day be all thats been planned
may she walk arm in arm with her dad to her man
as her mum watches on with such pride

Finally sweetheart if you read these words
know your vision also is mine
I have dreamt of this day where your love will remain
with the one who has captured your heart


Love with your heart love with your soul
stay true to yourself and your love
May your love keep growing and that smile keep showing
And may God Bless you both from above


© by Sue McDonald..........23/01/12
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Re: Quiet Time ? !

Post  Lucie on Tue Jan 24 2012, 07:41

absolutely splendid.... I truley love the way you write . I wish you all every blessing xx
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Re: Quiet Time ? !

Post  jinettyx on Tue Jan 24 2012, 10:56

Sue, I know how you're going to feel on that special day when your baby girl walks on the arm of her proud Daddy....so many tears of joy...
I wish you and your daughter a fabulous day that will remain forever in your memory for years to come....Can't wait to see all those fabulous photos...
Have a wonderful time. xxxx
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