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Post  Fred West on Fri Feb 10 2012, 04:27

The Frost Being Mean
The sun rose one frosty day, the frost said I am strong just go away,
The sun it shone and it said I will win
No you will not the frost said with a grin.
Day after day the sun came and went away,
The power of the frost too great for his shine,
This is winter and it is my own time,
The sun was in a mood wanting revenge
But the frost just laughed and got harder by day,
Got more force at night and came back with a grin,
There is no way you will ever win.
Then one day the sun rose to a beautiful sky,
The wind was no more, the cloud oh so high,
The sun bore down with the power he had
The frost heard a crack and tried to make more
But the sun had created a daughter for the frost and the ice,
He called her water, and she started to run,
Did not listen to dad just wanted to run and to play,
He tried to keep hold but she just ran away,
Then the sun began to torment the ice and the frost,
Just admit it now I win and you’re lost,
No more frost and warmth on the ground,
The sun had many friends and the frost just slinked away,
Come on sun said everyone give us some love,
And they looked up to the heavens above,
And the sun did smile, he reigned supreme,
He was good and the frost was.....just mean
©Fred West 2012
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Post  jinettyx on Fri Feb 10 2012, 05:38

Champion poem!!......great storytelling Fred! Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven sunny
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Post  Lucie on Sun Feb 12 2012, 02:54

Fred what a lovely story of nature! I really enjoyed reading it. Top of the icicle pile for that one, well done sir Like red star
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Post  Fred West on Tue Feb 14 2012, 06:22

thank you for the comments
sorry did not reply befre have been ill again and have only just recovered
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Post  jinettyx on Tue Feb 14 2012, 06:43

Hope you're feeling a lot better Fred xx
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Post  Little Owl on Wed Apr 04 2012, 05:10

Thanks for sharing. I am glad the mighty sun always wins in the long run.

sunny
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