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Post  Lucie on Sat Feb 11 2012, 11:19

I've walked around the edges, in the darkness of this box
Looked high and low and 'roundabout for ways it will unlock
I've racked my brain for reasons why I cannot see the key
How does a simple structure keep me from being free?

"Think from outside the box" the voices seem to shout
My head feels crushed with pressure. Can't think. Just let me out!
Trapped for twenty years now,in this box, my home, this life
And what if I should find the light..could I , on the outside, survive?
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Post  mikeschultz on Sat Feb 11 2012, 13:15

Powerful poem. Nicely done. Like a Star @ heaven

Your poetry is strong. Help it work for you. Thanks for sharing.

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Post  jinettyx on Sat Feb 11 2012, 14:59

mikeschultz wrote:Powerful poem. Nicely done. Like a Star @ heaven

Your poetry is strong. Help it work for you. Thanks for sharing.

Mike


Keep smiling... BIG hug
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