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Post  Sue McDonald on Mon Feb 13 2012, 20:13

On this 37th Valentines day that we celebrate
our love thats true and powerful solid and great
We love with our hearts share with our souls
have ups and downs though still strive for that goal

Nearly 36 years of marriage
the love still ''bubbles'' inside
as we walk hand in hand along the river
or sit and watch evening tide

The little things you do the care and love you show
theres no effort in your giving just from your soul it flows
the ''bubbles'' that I feel I know I'll never loose
as you fill me with ''that feeling'' I'm the one you chose

Sometimes they pop with anger and frustration deep inside
but you just walk away quietly, take my anger in your stride
by no means are you perfect if you were I wouldn't say
coz you give a man an inch they think they're a ruler..so they say !

Proud of who we have become
have achievements of which we can tell
we both work along seperate paths
then at dusk meet at loves wishing well

Our children all three have now grown
from our family nest have now flown
we gave them advice and our love
now watch them create familys with their love

Generations can be cruel or be kind
I feel ours is the latter in my mind
we've tried hard to be gentle and fair
to shelter from harm give true care

We watch and admire gentle ways
see their children learn what we taught most days
stand back with pride and those ''bubbles'' inside
knowing their love and feelings won't hide

So now its us time like it was once before
before cute little feet ran on floors
Chicks have all flown Grandchicks now and then
its nice that they're all home by ten !

On this 37th Valentine we celebrate
our love that to us is so great
we love with our hearts share with our souls
have ups and downs yet still strive for that goal

Of working together to keep strong family ties
at the end of each day look to each others eyes
know our love flows through family and friends
and those ''bubbles of love'' we still send



©️ by Sue McDonald ..........14/02/12 heart

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Post  Lucie on Tue Feb 14 2012, 02:51

sentimentally beautiful Susie-sue! I love the 'bubbles' and especially the last paragraph..xx
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Post  jinettyx on Tue Feb 14 2012, 04:38

A excellent read Sue! I too love the way you describe those "bubbles of love".......it's so romantic! Keep those "bubbles" flowing girl!!
Well done sweetness...xxxx
Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven heart heart hug
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Post  mikeschultz on Tue Feb 14 2012, 07:35

Beautifully written. The descriptive images and the theme of the "bubbles" are very nice indeed. Like a Star @ heaven Like
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