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Post  jinettyx on Fri Mar 09 2012, 10:02

Stay a while…


Sit with me a while, pray I
Let us breathe the sweetness of the air
Let us ponder on the day’s event
And the time that we did share

Stay a while, along side me
Let us be silent, hear the breeze
Cooling off the warmest day
As it whispers to the trees

Sit a while, with me, right here
Let our hearts beat soft and low
For there will be no other time
To let our feelings show

Feel my heart that beats too fast
With passion just for you
Shall we carve our names within a heart
To show our love is true

Sit with me a while, pray I
Let our senses be as one
As the heady scented summer breeze
Doth waft its romantic wand



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Re: Stay A While....

Post  Lucie on Fri Mar 09 2012, 10:21

Wonderfully written my angel! Sat reading this slow with my head cupped in my hands. Lovely xxx
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Re: Stay A While....

Post  jinettyx on Sat Mar 10 2012, 04:07

Me too chick......thankyou for doing the same and loving it! xxx give flowers
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Re: Stay A While....

Post  BC Williams on Sat Mar 10 2012, 07:58

Oh my goodness, this is so romantically beautiful, Jin. Just gorgeous writing! Hubby happy I suppose . . ..

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Re: Stay A While....

Post  jinettyx on Sat Mar 10 2012, 13:35

I can only hope so Bev.....Nice to see you back my love.. Very Happy
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Re: Stay A While....

Post  Lucie on Fri Mar 23 2012, 01:04

reread this again my love, please may we have some more lightheartedness to digest..xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx sunny
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Re: Stay A While....

Post  RichieO on Fri Mar 23 2012, 03:25

Well I am always sitting with me hands on me chin.......usually sleeping. No not true, you two girlie's are romantics which comes out in your writing, either that or the suns shining bright. I love your poems Jin and Lucie, they have meaning and are well thought out you both have a great talent. I am liking this one Jin...xxxxx Like red star give flowers YES!
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Re: Stay A While....

Post  Lucie on Fri Mar 23 2012, 04:51

Ah bless you sweetness xx
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