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Post  Lucie on Sun Mar 11 2012, 10:22

Spring days bring glimpses of the summer's ray
That taunt the children out to play
With buggy's, scooters, skates and bikes,
With footballs, ropes and toddler trikes.
In a range of ages in the street
I hear laughing, skipping, happy feet.
Though fresh the air, the children pour
Into the street, oh hear them roar.
Oh, if summer could not be here soon
To melt the cold and lift the gloom.
As I, upon my window seat
No longer can I use my feet,
But watch the happenings out there,
Of innocent fun with carefree flair.
It warms my heart and finds my smile
Pray, summer lasts a long, long while.

(c) Lucie


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Post  BC Williams on Sun Mar 11 2012, 11:01

Beautifully free writing Lucie:-) I used to wish for summer's balmy weather when I lived up north . . . I'll be content to enjoy Florida spring, as it's still refreshing enough to enjoy!

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Post  mikeschultz on Sun Mar 11 2012, 13:11

You bring the locus of longing from winter to summer as you reveal a soul enjoying the summer and the children a play, longing for it to never end. Very nice indeed. A lovely, hopeful poem. Thank you.
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Post  Lucie on Mon Mar 12 2012, 00:13

Most welcome friend. and thankyou for your words.
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Post  jinettyx on Mon Mar 12 2012, 02:55

Congratulations Lucie, on reaching your 100th poem on Bpoetry!!!!
Well done my little cherub! give flowers give flowers give flowers give flowers clapping
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Post  Lucie on Mon Mar 12 2012, 03:00

Really..?? ooh I just had to go back n' see... deep thought well would d'ya know,
Thanks! sunny

No real master pieces yet but i'll keep practising ..
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