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Beware..

Post  Lucie on Mon Mar 12 2012, 04:15

Beware! In the depths of that deep, dark cave
We found it by accident. Thought we were brave.
For inside we were met by ferocious eyes
Stay well-away.... it'll be your demise.
If you wander to closely to it's lair
Oh, you'll freeze from fright from whats in there
You'll be suddenly caught, for sure, it's true
It'll tear your flesh from your bones to chew.
My brother Billy. Big and tough..
Decided he would call my bluff,
So flexed his muscles and puffed his chest
Then, he burst out laughing..! (I was not impressed)
He strolled right in, whilst mocking'us
Twas silent at first. Before all the fuss
There was growling and snorting and footsteps and screams
I froze to the sound, with my fists in my jeans!
The thundering noise roared louder and nearer..
Then a muffled sound..CRUNCH, and the chomping came clearer
Dear Billy was gone. He'd become IT's day's snack
As the silence engulfed me, I had a panic attack.
I couldn't go home, to tell our poor mum,
How Billy was gone.. It was only "boys fun"..
So I hid in the woods, and live here till this day
Hoping to save foolish boys from their play.



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Re: Beware..

Post  jinettyx on Mon Mar 12 2012, 04:56

An excellent piece of scaremongering.........enjoyed it immensely!!!
Well done you scary thing!! Like affraid clapping clapping
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Beware

Post  cheryl.brickner on Tue Mar 13 2012, 09:23

Lucie,
Good writing! Boys are mischievious aren't they?
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