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Young George

Post  Lucie on Mon Mar 19 2012, 02:49

Poor young George had nothing appealing,
'Cept very high hopes that'd top any ceiling.
While one day at Uni, sat bored in his class
Anew girl arrived, Thought George, ( nice ass)
This young gorgeous girl, wayout of his league
How would he impress her, he looked such a dweeb!
No makeover could change him from tall, thin and puny
His mates all thought him an absolute looney!
Compared to other boys, for George, such a struggle
For, like most of the girls, she prefered bit o'muscle.
But being a nerd, it happened one night
Determined, he set out to win over this fight.
And so using a computer he wrote out a line
Disguising himself- it worked!- for a time.
He text hot lines from a teenage mag'
Where after sometime, he started to brag.
Twas on such a day that he sent her a greeting
When she suggested quite promptly, she wanted to meet him
Silly ol' George, in a desperate attempt
Gave little thought, and so his cousin he sent.
His cousin, a cad and a right proper tool
Ran off with his girl, George felt such a fool.
Poor George and his laptop. Alone, curser ablink
Gave in to his loss. His situation to rethink..
And so tapping away at the geekiest rate
George created himself a vitual date!
Maybe one day, if opportunity knocks
He might brave it out and pull up his socks
By going to gym and to tryout for the teams
Then hopefully George'll find the girl of his deams.

(c) Lucie
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Re: Young George

Post  jinettyx on Mon Mar 19 2012, 03:02

Aww...I really feel sorry for poor old George.....What a clever poetess you are!...Love how you can easily write funny and serious work! Well done Looby! xxxx Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven clapping
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Re: Young George

Post  Lucie on Mon Mar 19 2012, 03:10

Meerly ditties my flower-face, Had I the experience and wisdom ( not to mention artistically articulate brain cells) THEN i'd be a poetess..I think I'd like that,the time to Explore and experience cultures/ natures and write in depth my understanding of findings..
you're right, we are all but dreamers... :D
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