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Clickety Clack....

Post  jinettyx on Wed Mar 28 2012, 13:57

Clickety clack.

(door no.8)



Clickety clack, clickety clack
My heart beats in rhythm
To the wheels on the track

Clickety clack, clickety clack,
Onwards for miles
Don’t ever look back

Rolling and swaying
The rhythm beats faster
Clickety clack, the train is my Master

Taking me, speedily
Away from my home
Clickety clack, and I am alone

Faster and faster
Buildings are blurred
Escape to the country? Is this absurd?

Escape though, I must
New beginnings to find
Clickety clack, leave my troubles behind

The noise, it doth deafen
My brain in a spin
Clickety clack; get me off of this thing!

Into the unknown
I’m scared and upset
Why did I leave? Try to forget.

Clickety clack, no end to this track
Never look backwards
Never go back…



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Re: Clickety Clack....

Post  Lucie on Wed Mar 28 2012, 23:15

hold on tight girl..like this one, different to your usual, but I liked it. well done Pickle xx
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Re: Clickety Clack....

Post  jinettyx on Thu Mar 29 2012, 00:50

Thanks Lou...Dont know why this came out but it was fun! Very Happy
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Re: Clickety Clack....

Post  RichieO on Thu Mar 29 2012, 09:12

Choo-choo did you have a Guard on train journey and was I the Driver...lol
Nice poem Jinetty different but very good. give flowers
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Re: Clickety Clack....

Post  jinettyx on Thu Mar 29 2012, 15:03

Once upon a time ago
There was a handsome Guard
We went on journeys, him and I
I know you'll find that hard.
He'd be blowing at his whistle
I'd be proud as proud could be
All dressed in his uniform
My handsome Guard and me.
He'd tell me silly stories
Make me laugh at silly jokes
He hasn't changed for all his years
He's still a top notch bloke!
Dude
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Re: Clickety Clack....

Post  RichieO on Thu Mar 29 2012, 16:17

OMG I wonder who that was then, nudge, nudge wink, wink say no more??? lol. So when was it you last took a ride on a train or have you been watching The Tube?. What a poem I like it Jinettyx that was a long time ago when I was Guard....... #1 clapping give flowers
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Re: Clickety Clack....

Post  jinettyx on Fri Mar 30 2012, 01:22

Haha! I haven't been on a train since....I don't like the underground, I'm claustrophobic! affraid
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Re: Clickety Clack....

Post  RichieO on Fri Mar 30 2012, 01:36

So that's why you moved into the countryside to get away from enclosed spaces.....!!! Tunnels are not bad its the dark that frightens me.....lol. Not really.....
I have to take staff into the tunnels for track familiarisation and the thing that gets them is walking in the suicide pit. Well I tell em you don't have crawl under a train to locate a casualty but if you can save their life well.......?
Hope your feeling better today? give flowers sunny
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