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Post  Lucie on Mon Apr 02 2012, 04:10

Mirror, mirror in the hall
Who's the slimmest of them all?
Pray it's me i beg of you
I've tried everything-what can I do?
I've discovered diets from the elves
That suggest to throw foods off the shelves
I've swallowed magical slimming berries
Promised me by the forrest fairies.
Magical milkshakes and whimsical wishes
of fat fighting foods on small tastless dishes
I've starved me self silly to retrieve a small gap
in me jeans- and tried a hot body wrap!
So in all of me efforts, give me pride to feel tall
Will I EVER get into that dress, for the ball?
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Re: Miror mirror

Post  jinettyx on Mon Apr 02 2012, 04:21

Oh mirror, mirror, in the hall
there is no magic, no none at all
For all your efforts have been known to be
half-baked ideas, it's clear to see
You never needed a faddy diet
Just a big portion of 'peace and quiet'
So stop your stressing and be not a fool
One day Princess, you WILL enter the ball..!!
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Re: Miror mirror

Post  Lucie on Mon Apr 02 2012, 05:23

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Re: Miror mirror

Post  RichieO on Mon Apr 02 2012, 09:25

Well you two.....! what can say, both poems are exactly written. Maybe your both looking in the wrong mirrors you should come out of the Comedy Mirrors in the Fairground...lol.
You both have lovely figures and I am the eye of the beholder......!
Slimming, I thought about it once....! Only once though.

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Re: Miror mirror

Post  BC Williams on Mon Apr 02 2012, 10:16



Mirror mirror in the hall
you LIED to me,
you dirty moll!
I scrimped on food,
I drank much water
and all I got was da bathroom trotters.
The ball?
it'll come a week from next
and STILL, my tummy fluff projects -
my thighs doth thunder,
me chins be wigglin'.
You traitorous looking glass -
you laughed when I jiggled!

I'll take a hammer upon the morrow
and halt the nonsense that gives me sorrow . . ..


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Re: Miror mirror

Post  Lucie on Mon Apr 02 2012, 13:22

Thank you so much, I now look like the Cheshire Cat-smiling from
ear-------------------------------to-----------------------ear!!
Very witty
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Re: Miror mirror

Post  jinettyx on Tue Apr 03 2012, 00:15

Haha Well done Bev! Very funny response gal!! Like
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Re: Miror mirror

Post  Little Owl on Wed Apr 04 2012, 10:10

All three poems were just too cute! Very Happy
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