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Post  Lucie on Fri Apr 13 2012, 08:19

Somewhere in a darkened state
Sat William with his mouth agape.
How could this tragedy of occured,
To HIM!, of all people, how absurd.

So careful. Sure and systematic
Of everything in life- infatic
"Oh why" sat William, all forlorn
As he said to himself," I wish I weren't born!"

...( what could have happened to William?)


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Post  Lucie on Fri Apr 13 2012, 12:23

deep thought
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Post  Sue McDonald on Sun Apr 15 2012, 07:55

To fathers shed, I should not have gone
his tin of glue is way to strong.
A dodgy tin he kept it in,
I have no smile I have no grin !

His motorbike, I climbed upon
should have known the stand's not strong
It toppled, tumbled, fell on me
now all round me, glue I see !

Father's racing motorbike
the one thing in life, he truely likes
I can't run away or even hide
as his bloomin glues stuck me to his ride !!!
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Post  Sue McDonald on Sun Apr 15 2012, 07:56

Maybe ?? !!!!
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Post  Dori on Sun Apr 15 2012, 08:16

I don't know, I haven't a clue, but I sure would like to hear more from you !

Sounds like a mystery indeed, lets see how many guess there could be,
I'm not even going to guess, for it might come out a mess.

Great little poem Lucie ! Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like clapping

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Your poem also Sue was awesome ! clapping
I do love motorcycles just as long as there is a man in control. lol
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Post  Lucie on Mon Apr 16 2012, 01:08

oh brill! i likey!!

..Oh heck, whats that?! I hear a noise
I don't think I can keep my poise
Please don't come in, PLEASE don't be Dad,
He's gonna be stark, raving mad!
..
If only I could reach that spanner
To prise myself from this sticky manner
That if I persevere each tweak
D'you think they'd miss me all the week?
..
Cripes! someones coming, what to do?
Lets hope the door is stuck tight too..
How will I ever free myself
MUST stretch abit to grab the shelf....
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Post  Sue McDonald on Mon Apr 16 2012, 07:28

deep thought Give me a min or two !!!! YES!
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Post  Sue McDonald on Mon Apr 16 2012, 07:59

I hear the footsteps coming close
my breathings shallow and so slow
A shadow hovers close to the door
not sure if I can take much more

The handle shaken with attitude
someone unknown, about to intrude
Dad where are you ? when I need you so,
I think there's a thief and things could go

I stretch some more to reach the shelf
I need that spanner to protect myself,
one things for sure, dads bike is safe
its stuck to the floor, glued to the brakes !
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Post  cheryl.brickner on Mon Apr 16 2012, 09:55

What's the matter?
What do I fear?
I hear someone
Coming very near.
Before my eyes
I take a peek
To only find the door just creek!
Is it my imagination?
Who do I see?
My father standing
Right in front of me.
He glares into my eyes
As I acted so surprised!
He says "What have you done
With my glue?"
"I see it all over you!"
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Post  jinettyx on Mon Apr 16 2012, 10:05

Fantastic writing Girls!!!!! Keep it going please for this is too entertaining..!!!! Dude
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Post  peewee on Mon Apr 16 2012, 10:11

Looks like you sparked something here Lucie loo Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven
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Post  Sue McDonald on Tue Apr 17 2012, 05:06

I have an ending !!!!! Shall I put in yet ?? !!
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Post  Lucie on Tue Apr 17 2012, 07:11

What wonderfluffing poetesses you are!

..Yes please Sue, This has so brightened my day!! Thankyou for sharing with me, who's gonna nag the next one?..
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Post  Lucie on Tue Apr 17 2012, 07:12

Sorry doh
meant to read 'TAG' !!!!!!
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Post  Dori on Tue Apr 17 2012, 07:57

Don't be sorry Lucie, for I sometime can be such an nag.......to myself that is ! ha ha
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Post  Sue McDonald on Tue Apr 17 2012, 21:40

I stretch my arms and reached with fear
Oh dear father, let me be clear
I didn't mean to spill the glue,
I wanted a chance to spend time with you

Thought I'd make a frame for your bike
borrow your tools and glue that you like
I came to your shed but you weren't here
heard a stranger and hid in fear

The shelf to high, I had to climb
upon your bike, now all sticky and slimed
my intensions were true but I'm covered in glue
so is your bike, just don't know what to do

William sat in a darkened state
his mouth agape, awaiting his fate
Why did this tragedy have to occure
to me of all people its to absurd

The father moved towards his son,
William wishing his life had not begun
A fatherly arm placed on shoulders forlorn,
''William, my son don't wish you weren't born,

A tin of glue and a motorbike
can be replaced and put back on track
A loving son, who wants quality time
can't be replaced if he's lost from a climb !

Please remain being careful
systematic true and sure
Thats why, Oh Dear William,
We're so happy you were born'' !!



What do you reckon Lucie ? ........too much ? !


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Post  Lucie on Tue Apr 17 2012, 23:27

Bravo! super fantastic! Amazingly brilliant!!

My girls I am so proud... Loved this.
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Well Done Indeed
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Post  Sue McDonald on Tue Apr 17 2012, 23:49

Hi Lucie, I tried to tiethe end of the poem into the begining of yours by rearranging / repeating some of what you wrote in the begining !!! Hope that was ok !!! group hug give flowers heart
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Post  BC Williams on Wed Apr 18 2012, 02:50

You guys are so cute! You're like water's flow that cannot be stopped . . . I guess the prompt is important and I need to get it back out right away:-)

Great writing everyone!

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PS: still need contest entries . . . PM them to me - you know who you are, lol!

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Post  jinettyx on Wed Apr 18 2012, 04:43

Lol!...'nag' is a fair word ( speaking as an expert in the field! )

Love this little saga Lucie and Sue.... Great tag team!
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Post  Lucie on Wed Apr 18 2012, 09:36

..Had help from cheryl too and followed by Dori!..
I think you linking it to the beginning is a fantastic idea Sue, and one I will try to remember in mine.. Thank you!

Maybe you should start the next TAG-ALONG Sue?..

Thanks for reading everyone group hug



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Post  jinettyx on Tue May 08 2012, 03:20

I thoroughly enjoyed the TAGGING POETRY.. even if I was not able to contribute I hope there is more tagging from our other poets here on Bp.
Well done everybody for providing your talents for our pleasure!!!! More of the same Please!! xxx
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