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Post  Sue McDonald on Thu Oct 25 2012, 05:26

Thoughts Dscf4510


Went down to the river
just me and Gabrielle
don't know where her thoughts were
she's not old enough to tell

She has this little Bear
Charlie is his name
he goes nearly everywhere
he always plays her game

I tell her to be careful
she tells Charlie to
''Nannie said be carefull
I wook after you''!

Her cuteness and her innocence
fills me with content
I must have done something right
to have love so purely sent

I hope somewhere in her little mind
as she stares at the river
she knows how much her Nan loves her
and how much I love her with me



© by Sue McDonald...........25/10/12  :heart:


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Post  BC Williams on Thu Oct 25 2012, 12:40

Sweet words Sue . . . hope someday to experience some of these feelings myself:-) Good writing!

Hugs, bev

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