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Post  Fred West on Sun Dec 16 2012, 07:26

i fly my way into the room and land upon a dusty broom

I fly away and land again but this is just as bad as first i now will havea thirst,

take a sip and gone again landing ina dusty bin,

whe are al my family gone

eaten by a hungry swan

now I fly to a pig that is white

this isn't good cause he is bright

and with me being very dark

a bird can see just where I have parked

I do not want to become a dinner,

make a bird fatter and me much thinner

so now I will fly to a flower so bright

wait just there until the night

then I will fly before the stars

no-one will see me and I will be safe

flying around my world on the wing

and now just let the fun begin.

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Post  BC Williams on Sun Dec 16 2012, 07:34

Cute Fred! I can see you reading this to children. They would LOVE it! When are you going to put a children's poetry book together????? I did one for my dad's birthday this year. It turned out so great:-) You make the book . . . I want one. Go to Mixbook immediately. Mine is beautifully bound hardcover and cost me like 23 bucks. Just DO it. You can do the artwork too . . . or use the hundreds of clip art selections they offer. Check it out.

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