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Post  cheryl.brickner on Tue Jan 22 2013, 19:13

Falling

Falling from love
You thought was divine.
Your heart pumped faster
With the call of his name
Each time.
But he was never true
And kind,
Just filled with all lies!
How could she have been so blind?
Her heart was melting
As I watched her fall.
But then wait...
Heaven calls.
By His grace your heart starts to beat
Because He is holding you up
From the bottom of your feet!
The love you thought was perfect and true
Could only come from the Father
Who knew...
Your heart could be broken
But then made anew.
Falling out of love can hurt, it's true.
His grace is better in the end for you!

(C) Cheryl Jenkins Brickner 2013
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Post  Sue McDonald on Tue Jan 22 2013, 20:18

Beautiful Cheryl, Very close to home ....but beautifully written ....Well Done ! Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven give flowers
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Post  Lucie on Fri Jan 25 2013, 12:50

a very poignant piece, Cheryl. red star
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