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Intense almost pleasurable
Intense almost pleasurable
It's a pain you can't describe
Rocks you to the core
Intense almost pleasurable
You almost cry for more
Attacking all your senses
So bad it makes you sweat
Pain killers don't come close
Its a feeling you won't forget
Leaves you feeling weak
No strength in your lags at all
If you weren't already sitting
Then you would surly fall
It leaves you totally helpless
No other feeling can replace
The concentrated power
That's imprinted on your face
Sapping all your energy
You end up looking pale
All because the doctor
Trimmed your in growing toe nail
Pee Wee 2010 ©
It's a pain you can't describe
Rocks you to the core
Intense almost pleasurable
You almost cry for more
Attacking all your senses
So bad it makes you sweat
Pain killers don't come close
Its a feeling you won't forget
Leaves you feeling weak
No strength in your lags at all
If you weren't already sitting
Then you would surly fall
It leaves you totally helpless
No other feeling can replace
The concentrated power
That's imprinted on your face
Sapping all your energy
You end up looking pale
All because the doctor
Trimmed your in growing toe nail
Pee Wee 2010 ©
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Re: Intense almost pleasurable
That got you thinking didn't it? 

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David will have to come look at this one . . . he's had that done several times and has to be strapped down :lol:
Yup, I thought something else too:-)
Good writing, P!
Yup, I thought something else too:-)
Good writing, P!
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Re: Intense almost pleasurable
Been there, done that. I think you're giving it TOO much credit. I'd prefer a double appendectomy. Sure glad it's gone. Humorous piece, well done.
Thanks,
David
Thanks,
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Thanks. It isn't my best work but was one of those poems that grew as I went on lol
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great writing well done
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Thanks Fred Much appreciated
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mmmmmmmm!!!! my mind does work overtime !!! Brilliant piece of writing, I think !






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Thanks Kid'o
I do love winding people up ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
I do love winding people up ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
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