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Post  peewee on Sun Oct 24 2010, 16:22

Intense almost pleasurable






It's a pain you can't describe
Rocks you to the core
Intense almost pleasurable
You almost cry for more

Attacking all your senses
So bad it makes you sweat
Pain killers don't come close
Its a feeling you won't forget

Leaves you feeling weak
No strength in your lags at all
If you weren't already sitting
Then you would surly fall

It leaves you totally helpless
No other feeling can replace
The concentrated power
That's imprinted on your face

Sapping all your energy
You end up looking pale
All because the doctor
Trimmed your in growing toe nail





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Post  Guest on Sun Oct 24 2010, 19:42

Is it the relief of the toe nail being removed? :))

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Post  peewee on Sun Oct 24 2010, 19:48

That got you thinking didn't it? Very Happy
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Post  Guest on Sun Oct 24 2010, 19:55

Hahaha That is one way of putting it. :)

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Post  BC Williams on Sun Oct 24 2010, 21:36

David will have to come look at this one . . . he's had that done several times and has to be strapped down :lol:

Yup, I thought something else too:-)

Good writing, P!

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Post  Mr Williams on Mon Oct 25 2010, 08:10

Been there, done that. I think you're giving it TOO much credit. I'd prefer a double appendectomy. Sure glad it's gone. Humorous piece, well done.

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Post  peewee on Mon Oct 25 2010, 08:34

Thanks. It isn't my best work but was one of those poems that grew as I went on lol
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Post  Fred West on Mon Oct 25 2010, 11:27

great writing well done
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Post  peewee on Mon Oct 25 2010, 12:00

Thanks Fred Much appreciated
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Post  Sue McDonald on Mon Oct 25 2010, 14:29

mmmmmmmm!!!! my mind does work overtime !!! Brilliant piece of writing, I think ! red star clapping clapping red star red star red star


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Post  peewee on Mon Oct 25 2010, 15:53

Thanks Kid'o
I do love winding people up ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
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