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Jack Frost Dancing

Post  peewee on Tue Dec 07 2010, 11:17

Fingers of ice in the air
Caressing the trees
Jack Frost dancing
Creating a bitter breeze

Sparkling in the moonlight
Like diamonds on the ground
A curtain of white
Spreading all around

Winter has arrived
It arrives before you know
Preparing to cover us all
In a blanket of snow

All the preparation
Cutting logs sure does tire
But it makes it all worth wile
As you sit in front of the fire

Wrap up warm in a blanket
Like a chick under mothers wing
Stay in front of the fire
Till the sunshine brings the spring



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Re: Jack Frost Dancing

Post  Guest on Tue Dec 07 2010, 20:43

Wonderful imagery Peter, love it. :))

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Re: Jack Frost Dancing

Post  peewee on Tue Dec 07 2010, 22:32

Thank you Chrissy Its a bit of a new tack for me I dont write like that very often
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Re: Jack Frost Dancing

Post  Guest on Tue Dec 07 2010, 23:58

It certainly worked out very well.

My Peter is trying to encourage me to try different styles. I will have to look some up and learn how to do them first though. The more I write the more I realise I know very little. I am thinking about picking up a subject next year, if my girls will let me. xx

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Re: Jack Frost Dancing

Post  BC Williams on Wed Dec 08 2010, 06:38

I think you are on the right track, Peter. Yes, it's image driven writing, and really alive! Keep it up . . .

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Re: Jack Frost Dancing

Post  Mr Williams on Wed Dec 08 2010, 20:57

Very nice writing Peter. Glad I 'hope' I don't have to worry about Jack Frost.

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Post  peewee on Wed Dec 08 2010, 23:24

Thank you very much
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