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Our Future Dream

Post  Sue McDonald on Fri Apr 29 2011, 00:06

Our future dream
hopefully a whisper away
we have searched for many a day
along rivers and trickling streams.

The trickling streams were to small
the river of beauty so long
with her cliffs and hidden bends
we thought our search wouldn't end.

On one of our famous drives
through country and river side
we found our dream near the river
so large that she just couldn't hide.

She sits there with grace and style
leaving our minds running wild
our dream as close as the air
that brushes and rustles our hair.

We design her in mind with such style
then drive home over many a mile
contact her owner to purchase
now we have to wait a short while.

Her owner should contact us soon as
the suns being replaced by the moon
we patiently wait for the call
the suspense driving me up the wall.

The evening now has arrived
our phones securely at our side
we peruse over photos we've taken
to make sure that we are not mistaken.

The phone cuts the thin night air
as the ring is replaced with a stare
as I watch for a response on his face
I feel my heart skip its pace.

We have to wait for a reply
so decide to get some shut eye
with excitment we retire sleep and dream of....
Our Future Dream

© by Sue McDonald..........30/04/11





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Re: Our Future Dream

Post  BC Williams on Fri Apr 29 2011, 04:01

Well the excitement is building! I know exactly the feeling you are having waiting on the call. For me, I couldn't sleep. I finally had to back away from the idea emotionally just to be able to do my day to day.

Fingers crossed . . . but oooooh!
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Re: Our Future Dream

Post  Fred West on Fri Jun 03 2011, 02:56

great and knowing the ned result is good too
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Re: Our Future Dream

Post  Teresa Jane Price on Tue Jun 21 2011, 23:03

Nicely done.
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