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Post  Teresa Jane Price on Fri Apr 29 2011, 14:54

One beat, one step, one breath,
The cadence of my day,
With my head hanging,
Hair curtaining,
I weave down the narrow
Amongst a forest of eyes
And whispers, gossip's noise.
How do they know?
For whom told?
Is it my body of bones
Or my vampire shade
That gives to them the right
To beat upon this life?
And the weight, the despise,
Leaves me in darkness, black as ink,
While the mocking, the shoving,
The ridiculing, the pitying,
Weakens my soul,
Entangles my thoughts.
This nightmarish routine churns deep,
Lying where I cannot sleep.
Evenso, such is abound,
Someone will listen,
See my tears and lead me to tell,
There is more to me than this Hell.
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Post  Sue McDonald on Fri Apr 29 2011, 23:02

Sad but wonderful writing, this could describing myself a few years ago !
Wonderful way of writing feelings and fears ....Well done !
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Post  alitnobani on Wed May 04 2011, 17:05

I like this poem. Sometimes the monotony of life turn it to hell.
well done
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