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Post  Teresa Jane Price on Sun May 22 2011, 22:59

The dew kisses the rose.
The yellow orb breaks into day.
The grass is a tad greener.
I nestle in the splendor, all around.
The silver bells toll.
Playing children laugh.
Choirs sing of God.
I rock into a near sleeping nod.
My blue eyes see the pleasance..
Tuesday, my dog, sleeps on her blanket.
Dow snores with remote in hand.
I smile joyously as the breeze caresses.


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Post  mikeschultz on Mon Nov 21 2011, 20:32

Hey, Teresa, "All Around" is a very nice poem. I'd say you nailed that Declarative form right on the head. Keep up the good work. Mike
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Post  Lucie on Wed Nov 23 2011, 10:48

ditto mike's comment..and good to see you back, Teresa x
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Post  BC Williams on Wed Nov 23 2011, 18:00

Boy, I remember the prompt from several months back. No wonder I didn't see this:-) Good, very good writing Tee. Miss you here . . .

hugs, bev
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