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Post  Dori on Wed Oct 05 2011, 09:00

This castle was built in sixteen hundred and two,
by a man who loved his new bride.
He wanted her to have the best of everything,
right down to the diamonds on her crown.

They had lived in their castle for only a year,
no children have they.
When in the middle of the night an intruder broken in,
The man tired to protect his wife,
when he was killed.

A saber through the heart is how he died,
that night she of a broken heart.
For they had loved each other,
with all their might.

Since that night of untimely death,
the man and woman lives there still.
Forever keeping out anyone,
who tries to take over their home.

They walk the corridors at midnight,
the hour they had died.
Just moaning and lighting the candles,
on the walls scaring the intruders until they leave.

They will be forever happy in....
their castle on Edinburg's Hill....


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Post  peewee on Wed Oct 05 2011, 10:28

Really nice Dori
I have been to a Castle this week
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Post  Dori on Wed Oct 05 2011, 19:32

Thanks Peter, I seen that, will you be going to Edinburg Castle ?

I hopew you are having an awesome time, that the weather is excellent for you...
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Post  Dori on Wed Oct 05 2011, 19:33

Oh yeah, did you see my poem "The Castle" it's the first of this series....
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Post  peewee on Wed Oct 05 2011, 23:55

No more Castles this trip Dori, and the weather is grim but never mind lol
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Post  Dori on Thu Oct 06 2011, 07:53

I hope the the weather will clear up so you can really enjoy your trip.....well there is a lot of other sights to see, like the green hills and many other places...
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Post  Sue McDonald on Tue Oct 11 2011, 18:32

Beautiful Dori, I love castles and all the history they hold ....nicely writen Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven BIG hug
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Post  Dori on Tue Oct 11 2011, 19:00

Thanks Sue, this just part 2 of the CASTLE, the first one is called "THE CASTLE...glad you enjoyed reading "THE CATLE: TWO"
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Post  Dori on Tue Oct 11 2011, 19:01

Thanks Sue, this just part 2 of the CASTLE, the first one is called "THE CASTLE...glad you enjoyed reading "THE CATLE: TWO"
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