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Post  jinettyx on Fri Feb 17 2012, 13:48


Facing the fact


As much as I recall the day
You stood and said “I do”
Dressed in your gown, so radiant
We were overwhelmed by you

You knew he was the man for you
You knew all his faults as well
And although I had reservations
My heart for you did swell

Time and time and time again
He has let you down
But the strength in you continued
You refused to wear a frown

The hardest thing for you right now
Is to give up, throw in the towel
It’s not in your nature, I know that
You’ve not been one to “fail”

How many times will you give in?
To the pain it’s causing you
It doesn’t have to be like this
You’ve braved it too long, it’s true

Some things can’t be mended
How ever hard you try
Best for everyone I feel
If he just said… “Goodbye”….


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Post  peewee on Sat Feb 18 2012, 20:40

Hard one to comment on
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Post  RichieO on Sun Feb 19 2012, 00:02

Oh my I hope its no one really close to you thats given you those thoughts. It's a really sentimental poem a lot of feeling put into it. xxx
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Post  Lucie on Mon Feb 20 2012, 00:41

words heard well x
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Post  RichieO on Mon Feb 20 2012, 03:07

Oooops the penny has dropped, hit me with a wet kipper, the rough end. Take care please........ give flowers
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Post  Little Owl on Tue Apr 03 2012, 05:13

Very heart felt. I could feel the emotion in every sentiment. Peewee was right, very hard to comment on.
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Post  BC Williams on Tue Apr 03 2012, 05:22

"She's" young. She knows life is short. Maybe she doesn't hear the birds singing anymore, can't see the sky opening a new day. Doesn't mean it's not there when she's ready to look. Let's pray she does soon, and moves forward into a happier existence. I did, and I'm an old hen that believes it's never too late.

Loves ya . . . and keep watch.

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