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Post  Lucie on Sun Feb 26 2012, 15:25

Gingerbread, Gingerbread, Gingerbread Men!
One, two. three, four- all the way up to ten.
Decorated sweetly with icing in lines
Mmm, that one looks tasty-Oops, now there's nine!
With their chocolate-drop noses, raisen eyes, on a plate
Ah..your legs hanging over- Oh No, now there's eight.
Those cinnamon spices like a small taste from heaven,
That crumbles and melts in your mouth- Whoops! seven!
Bright coloured smarties, every child licks their lips,
Entising your tastebuds- not surprised there are SIX
We were watching a film where one comes alive!
A couragous young biscuit..(CRUNCH) counted five.
I think that we should've baked twice as much more,
For those Ginger's are hiding, how come there are four?
Oh such a dilema, When there's just you and me
How can we share fairly when I can see three?!
I know, let us save one. then that'll leave two,
That'll be perfect for just me and you!
UH-OH- someone's coming! quick hide- think it's Mum!!
Oh NO, look- she's eaten them. I guess their ALL DONE!

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Post  Lucie on Sun Feb 26 2012, 15:28

last line should read:
" Oh NO, look-she's eaten them and she didn't leave one!" doh
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Post  jinettyx on Mon Feb 27 2012, 03:05

What ever the ending should have been, it really doesn't matter because this little treat was absolutely BRILLIANT!!!! Loved it immensely! well done!
Very Happy Like a Star @ heaven red star Like a Star @ heaven red star Like a Star @ heaven sunny
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