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Post  wannabe on Sun Mar 11 2012, 09:55

i've never written a poem before,
and I don't know if this one is right
but it's now or never and here is my verse
i'm writing it here on your site
this place is neat and looks to be fun
the people are friendly and close
and i thought i would write now to let them know
i like BpoetryWriters the most.

thank you, wannabe
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Post  Lucie on Sun Mar 11 2012, 10:30

Thats fantastic, my friend
So glad you came by
Your poem is great
Well done. A good try
We welcome you warmly
I hear them all say
please write us some more
And we hope you will stay
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Post  BC Williams on Sun Mar 11 2012, 10:57

Thanks for stopping by our little forum, wannabe. For a first time poem, you did fine! Drop by again if you have the inclination:-) give flowers

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Post  jinettyx on Sun Mar 11 2012, 13:48

Dear Wannabe, Please come and stay
We're so glad that you popped in with a ditty
Your rhyming is great, so don't hesitate
Come and join us to a challenge of witty.
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And each of us are supporting the other
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And Bev is our wonderful Mother
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Post  Lucie on Mon Mar 12 2012, 00:08

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