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Post  Sue McDonald on Mon Apr 30 2012, 06:14

Hey you out there with your eyes closed tight
with minds that push away with fright
Abuse that happens both night and day
helps scared children push their guilt away

They're told don't tell, don't show, don't cry,
no one seems to realize why
Children so silent scared with tears
have unleashed anger, hurt and fears

So when these children do, whats classed wrong
don't stand over them, powerfully strong
Go to their level with love in your eyes
there is no need for them to lie

Give them a chance to tell what hurt,
of how their inner feelings skirt
from heart to mind, mind to heart
truely tear young lifes apart

They're not so ''nasty'' with ''no sole''
they're children, who, don't feel quite whole
misunderstood and pushed around
feelings almost trampled to the ground

With support and faith, they will fight back
just need some help along that painfull track
With inner knowledge and some inner strength
they'll gain inner freedom, less torment


© by Sue McDonald..........writen29/11/93


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Post  jinettyx on Mon Apr 30 2012, 14:34

Sue....Bravo my lovely Bravo! clapping clapping clapping
Thankyou for writing this and sharing your thoughts. xxxxx
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