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Post  Lucie on Tue May 01 2012, 05:51

She was young and small
So impressionable,
All feared how the big world would change her.
She was meek and mild
A sweet lil' child,
So they hid her away, not to break her.

They fed her on tales,
To put fear in her sails
So she'd always stay close in the village.
Yet her mind kept on searching
Like wild rose emerging
From a girl to a beautiful young image.

She grew older than years.
So too, all their fears
All her questions were needing new answers.
Till' a change in the wind
Blew a travelling show in,
The town filled with extravegant dancers!

The girls eyes lit like fire
They had stoked her desire
She decided she'd travel on with them.
The town's folk tried to plead
But they didn't succeed
Broken hearted, they vowed not again..

Will they ever inprison
Such a waste of a mission,
To think they could curb natures bidding.
For the young have more passion
Than folk- law could fashion
T'keep 'em restrained, WHoooaaahhhh who are they kidding!!!!!




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Post  Sue McDonald on Tue May 01 2012, 23:21

Brilliant Lucie, well done I love the feeling in this poem ! give flowers BIG hug
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Post  jinettyx on Wed May 02 2012, 00:39

This is brilliant Lucie!!!! clapping Well done cutie xxx
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Post  Lucie on Wed May 02 2012, 23:30

Thankyou my lovely ladies xx
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