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Post  jinettyx on Wed May 09 2012, 05:46

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Dear Lord, I know you’re busy
You have too much to do
But Lord, I ask a favour
Because I haven’t got a clue
You see, I’m having conflict
With my mind, it’s plain to see
Every time I ask a question
I tend to disagree!
Am I schizophrenic?
Is there two of me?
I had to ask the question
In case I disagree.
I know that this is nonsense
I may have lost the plot
But thinking is not my forte
Between my ears…. a slot.
Dear Lord, I wouldn’t ask it
For you’ve enough to do
But could you find out who I am?
Because I haven’t got a clue.
affraid

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Post  Sue McDonald on Wed May 09 2012, 06:32

You are just brilliant ....what a fantastic piece of poetry, you could so have been writing this about me !!! You truely are a very talented lady !! Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven give flowers heart
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Post  jinettyx on Wed May 09 2012, 09:52

Ah Sue Darlin', Thanks very much...... I guess we ARE so much alike! Lol!
This I just did on a whim, I had no idea where it was going... Lol!
A bit like real life for me at the moment. hahaha!
Boy, I'm a strange person at the moment! Hormones everywhere!
Big hug to you Sister! xxxxxx high 5 group hug
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Post  RichieO on Wed May 09 2012, 16:49

Well that's me all over Jin," is it Rich, yes it is....oh yeah"....lol Nice piece of writing well it goes to say a brilliant talent for words. With a Knick knack paddy whack give me doggy a bone........Nice one Gal.......xxx clapping Like Like a Star @ heaven
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Post  mikeschultz on Thu May 10 2012, 07:11

Oh, you dear soul, how well I know the plight, that makes us feel more than just Me, Mysel and I. Excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it several times. Thanks. Mike
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