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Post  Sue McDonald on Wed Jun 20 2012, 08:02

Sitting with my laptop
on a quite sunny day
watching river life drift by
no speech, nothing to say !

Looking at the laptop screen
watching people have their say,
as the river with its beauty
drifts past me in its special way.

Friends with thoughts and problems
pop up on my screen
typing in their sentences
hoping, to release some strain.

Wishing I could help them
by delete or backspace mode
giving back some happiness
the laptops hardly shown.

SO

If the response that you are seeking
doesn't pop up on the screen,
or someone responds so hurtfully
it makes you want to scream,

Grab yourself some paper
write yourself some words
let your thoughts inside of you
know they have been heard.

You may not get the answer
no one else will see,
you and your thoughts safely scribed
when its safe, let them go free !

Go down to the river
or somewhere near the coast
somewhere, where the water runs
to let your thoughts run free.

Take the time to breath,
the deepest breath inside,
hold, then blow out all your pain,
let the river take it, or the tide.



by Sue McDonald.....................20/06/12.... Inspired by my friend Amanda ..xx
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Post  jinettyx on Wed Jun 20 2012, 12:30

Smashing!!!!!!! That's JUST what I'll do Sue!! xxxxx give flowers
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Post  Lucie on Wed Jun 20 2012, 13:46

Love love love this second half....boy, can you make it flow..x Like
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