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Post  peewee on Mon Oct 22 2012, 10:51

Someone help me





Sitting here for ages
Feeling really good
Then he got depressed
I guess I knew he would

Now he’s hit the bottle
Things are getting low
What will happen later
I just don’t want to know

Every time he pours a drink
My thoughts get really deep
I wish he would just give up
Get drunk and fall asleep

The bottle is getting empty
Don’t know how much I can take
My life is in the balance
All the time he is awake

All because he lost his girlfriend
He just keeps on calling Sheila
Just what prat thought it was a good idea
Putting a worm in a bottle of Tequila





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Post  jinettyx on Tue Oct 23 2012, 03:18

A very sad read Peter.....always a reminder of how a night out can so easily turn into a disaster....

Very good poem as always. xx
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