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Post  peewee on Tue Nov 27 2012, 02:03

An angel touched my hand tonight





An angel touched my hand tonight
She said come walk with me
Your pain will stay behind
Your time has come to be free

An angel touched my hand tonight
A surge shook my inner core
All my worries and my burdens
Didn't matter any more

An angel touched my hand tonight
She lead me to some stairs
My lord god had sent her
To answer all my prayers

An angel touched my hand tonight
She said you shouldn't feel glum
This is the start of a brand new life
Be happy your time has come

An angel touched my hand tonight
My future is now set in stone
I am going to a better place
Never more to be alone






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Post  mikeschultz on Tue Nov 27 2012, 18:47

Well done! As we said in the Navy, "Bravo-Zulu!" I enjoyed the revelation of the first reading and coming to the final lines and the realization of the seriousness of the poem. I read it twice more and enjoyed the poem more with each reading, the mark of a good poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Post  peewee on Wed Nov 28 2012, 03:06

I appreciate that and am glad you liked it
Thank you
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Post  jinettyx on Wed Nov 28 2012, 15:04

I really love this one Pete....gives me a little tingle when I read it..x
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Post  peewee on Wed Nov 28 2012, 15:08

It's just a bunch of words lol
Thank's xxxx
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Post  Sue McDonald on Thu Nov 29 2012, 06:02

Very good ''Bunch of Words'' ! well done Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven
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