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Post  Lucie on Thu Mar 07 2013, 00:43

Toasting crumpets in the morning
As the kettle starts to blow
Is how I start to waken
My 'get up' loud-'let's go!'

I bustle in the bathroom
For a queue picks up outside
Like a station in the outbacks
Takes one passenger per ride

Crashing through the kitchen
For some space along the tops
Fighting others for the cupboards
And the goodies- can cause strops!

But up against the clock, you know
To reach the finish line
I grab my bag, my keys, my shoes
Making pretty good my time

Now out the door and up the road
I pace so fast I cough
And scrambling through the doors at work
They shout, "it's your day off!"

(C) lu
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Post  Sue McDonald on Sun Mar 10 2013, 20:23

Oh my god ! I have done this ......Very well written Lucie I love it ,as I do all of your work !......hope you are well sweetheart ....xxx
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Post  Lucie on Mon Mar 11 2013, 00:13

Thank you kindly Sue x and am just peachy too ! Thanks for asking . Much love.
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Post  mikeschultz on Tue Mar 12 2013, 03:36

Lucie,

Very nice poem, clever and well composed, I read it twice through and smiled both times. Thank you.

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Post  Lucie on Tue Mar 12 2013, 07:08

If a smile is all I achieved I have achieved. Thank you immensely for reading
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Post  jinettyx on Mon Mar 18 2013, 08:07

Coo..what a nutter!.......Love your funnys....but love you more! xx
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