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Post  Sue McDonald on Fri Apr 12 2013, 00:54

Hi Nan, I received my birthday wishes,
they arrived in an awesome dream,
of you and I walking on the beach
and the sun had this certain gleam

The water was crystal clear
it sparkled like your eyes
sand so soft and golden
with the bluest of blue skies

We built a birthday cake
from cool and dampend sand
decorated with pebbles and shells
that were scattered on this piece of land

You sat there and sang ''Happy Birthday'',
I laughed as you sang out of tune,
You turned to Ken, and laughed as you said,
''Tell her not to be so mean''!

We laughed and joked so much
reminisced on the years gone by
then a candle you placed in my cake
danced along with the light of the sky

''Happy Birthday Sueky'' you said
''time to blow your candle out''
not long now and I must return
cannot stay in our dream all night

I remember I held out my hand
as you drifted along with the waves
as finger tips broke our embrace
final touch wiped the tears from my face.....

I awoke with the tears on my pillow
sorrow as I knew you were gone
joy to know I'll always have you my Nan
in my heart with my soul in our home

On this fourth year you've been parted from us
still miss all the cheek and your fuss,
you always made me feel so special and loved, so
thankyou for Birthday Wishes from above.....

Love you Nan with all my heart,
see your smile in the sun, feel your tears as rain
the softness in your touch as the breeze blows through the trees ....xxxxx


©By Sue McDonald.......12/04/13.....for my beautiful awesome Nan
R.I.P For ever in our hearts & thoughts





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