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What thoughts, indeed. Nice poem. I like the repetition of thought and the images you reveal as you unravel your memories in search of your thoughts. Well done, sir. Thanks for sharing your poem.
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Thanks Mike, another railway colleague had passed away I tried to use the words to comfort those thoughts you go through when one is grieving.
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