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I hear you

Post Jenna French on Sun Jul 03 2011, 14:44

I hear your voice like the wind in the trees
The sweet sound of your whisper blowing in the breeze
I am sure I have caught you out before
Hearing your footsteps on the floor
The sweet smell only you make
I smell it when I wake
Please do not be shy or scared
You are such a special person for who I cared

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Re: I hear you

Post Jinetty on Mon Jul 04 2011, 02:16

I like this very much N-S. I think of all the special people I have also loved and lost...Jin.

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Re: I hear you

Post Jenna French on Mon Jul 04 2011, 06:15

im glad you liked it :)
i wrote this for my nanna i miss her loads :(

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Re: I hear you

Post peewee on Mon Jul 04 2011, 16:01

Sometimes it is more difficult to capture everything in a small work but this works well

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Re: I hear you

Post Jenna French on Mon Jul 04 2011, 16:16

ty very much

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Re: I hear you

Post Sue McDonald on Wed Oct 12 2011, 03:22

This is beautiful Jenna, I am really enjoying the way you write clapping

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