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Post  Sue McDonald on Thu Sep 01 2011, 07:53

Sadness can affect you in many different ways
it has a way of touching you, that leaves you in a daze
you carry on day to day have so much to be thankful for
then suddenly there's heaviness and tears falling to the floor

You find yourself day dreaming of things that have gone past
thinking if done differently would certain sadness last
Your mind is drowning in a fog of short acts passing through
Would you change the character to make life play more true

I find myself a wandering around inside my head
sifting through some words I've heard and some not yet said
I feel the tears run down my cheeks I know it's my release
so tired of people hurting me, please, just leave me in peace

I try to give to people what I so love to feel,
so, not quite understanding why others are not real
why fakeness and hurt has to rear its ugly head
what makeup is inside them to give out such hurtful dread

Well, I guess I'll carry on, NO, I know I will in fact
being who I am and give all that I can
Hoping that one day those who should be close will realise
that it's they who are missing out, with their hurtful ways and lies



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Post  BC Williams on Thu Sep 01 2011, 08:45

I know you get hurt so and are effected by the folks around you Sue. And as for your questions, I'm not sure anyone of us has the answers. There are people in this world that thrive off hurting others, but in the end - it is themselves they truly hurt. So we have to stick with what we know, treat others as we'd want to be treated, and realize - justice is not of this world but our time is coming!

Thoughtful and very good writing Sue. Thank you for bringing this for us to read and learn from:-)

hugs, bev
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