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Post  alitnobani on Fri Oct 14 2011, 05:30

By: Ali Taha Alnobani
© 2011 by Ali Taha Alnobani

As usual, she went to her large tree
Now, she has something to share
Dusty horizon over her grey hair
Foggy mountains gazing at her wrinkled face
Colors reflection on her eyes
Things flying with no base
Collecting stories is very sad
Especially if you barely remember
that you have one try!
And if details are mixed with pace
***
She can touch her old dreams
Flying there like Autumn's leaves
- hey lovely nature
You can renew yourself every year
Please give me a chance for a new start
To taste love and art
To meditate on colors' horizon
And to learn how to engrave my vision on hard rocks

****
That evening, she went away muttering to herself
Every day, I feel her through the dusk
And with the swish of the trees
wondering around all the world
and all the seas
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Post  BC Williams on Sat Oct 15 2011, 04:34

Just beautiful Ali! Likening autumn to a woman on a journey, a woman in the autumn of her life. The things she has seen! My elderly father went through a period here a couple years ago where he mourned the things he'd never gotten to do, but I reminded him of all the things in his years he HAD accomplished! I guess we could liken the colors and textures of autumn to a life richly lived, full of stories and adventures.

Very nice writing my friend! Thank you, and I'd love to see more of you . . .

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Post  alitnobani on Sat Oct 15 2011, 08:20

Thank you Bev, In fact every year at the end of summer is the season of a mysterious feeling of sadness and loss for me, I don't know why, all my old dreams, that didn't come true come again and dance in front of my eyes.
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Post  Teresa Jane Price on Wed Nov 30 2011, 11:41

Bev said it well. Nicely done
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Post  mikeschultz on Thu Feb 16 2012, 19:15

To write of love and longing is a poet's greatest labor of love, and you've done well. Like a Star @ heaven
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Post  Little Owl on Wed Apr 04 2012, 07:18

The autumn of our years, does anyone young ever imagine themselves there? The years have flown by, most taken up by life's daily routine. Very reflective poem, making me wish I had paid closer attention to time passing by. New resolution, start a bucket list and try to experience some of life's treasures. Loved your poem.


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Post  alitnobani on Wed Apr 04 2012, 15:37

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