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Post  Jenna French on Fri Nov 04 2011, 09:53

I lay here in my bed
silly thoughts run round my head
thinking about what my life means to me
wondering if I should want to feel free
yes once life was my stage
now it has become my cage
to take the stage and sing my song
should that be made wrong
to see the world through others eyes
is that something I should have to disguise
am I wrong for wanting to be free
am I wrong for wanting to be me
I know the people of this cage that holds me
want me to be me
but I cant be behind these bars of safety yet mistrust
freedom without their worry has to be a must
so I will tell them time and time
free me as this life is mine

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Post  Lucie on Fri Nov 04 2011, 12:19

Good 'deep' writing Jenna. (have a whole book of these..:/)
Its amazing how many emotions stir within..tis good to get them out( atleast)
Very Happy sunny
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Post  jinettyx on Sat Nov 05 2011, 01:54

Good writing Jenna give flowers
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Post  Dori on Sat Nov 05 2011, 08:27

Great poem Jenna give flowers BIG hug
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Post  BC Williams on Sun Nov 06 2011, 16:52

Change begins with a thought, then a plan. Chin up girl:-)

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Post  Sue McDonald on Sun Nov 06 2011, 21:03

Jenna awesome writing, my head feels like one of those bird cages, the round ones....words & pictures going around and around, asking, thinking, wondering, why ? how ? what have I done to you ( mother !) for you to be this way with me ?????? Trying to find a way out but my head is sooooooooooo full !!! Opppps sorry .....going on a bit !! Really good writing, I think I understand a little of where your coming from ....stay strong beautiful lady ...xxxx give flowers BIG hug
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Post  Jenna French on Mon Nov 07 2011, 11:12

thank you all so much.

I will stay strong I promise xxx
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