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Post  RichieO on Fri Feb 14 2014, 06:43

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Post  mikeschultz on Wed Feb 19 2014, 12:43

What thoughts, indeed. Nice poem. I like the repetition of thought and the images you reveal as you unravel your memories in search of your thoughts. Well done, sir. Thanks for sharing your poem.

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Post  RichieO on Thu Feb 20 2014, 00:12

Thanks Mike, another railway colleague had passed away I tried to use the words to comfort those thoughts you go through when one is grieving.
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