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A few of my pieces

Post  Jenna French on Thu Jun 30 2011, 16:43

Love

Close you eyes lay on your bed
Wear my words run round your head
Open your mind and you will hear
My words whisper in your ear
Words of love words of lust
But most of all words of trust
Feel my words speak to your soul
Feel your soul trust I will make you whole
Look inside and look deep
There you will see the feelings your heart does keep
Feel your body rise to my touch
Relax and you will see I'm what you want so much
Feel my lips press against yours
See our love open any doors
See your love reflect in my eyes
Feel our passion as it shoots us to the skies
Know that when you taste my lips on yours
That thing you feel means I will always be yours

Forgotten days

Forgotten rhymes
So many things lost in time
Hope and happiness
Replaces with pain and stress
Kisses and hugs
Replaced with evil an thugs
Truth and respect
Replaced with
Lies and neglect
What a world around me
Makes me sick to see
Where is the joy and smiles
Where is the child's laughter heard for miles
Where are the days when life was safe and secure
How I miss when life was good and pure

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Re: A few of my pieces

Post  BC Williams on Thu Jun 30 2011, 19:05

Very pensive writing, Jenna. Being a newly wed, I'm drawn to your first piece. I understand love needs and deserves trust, for without it there can't truly be love.

In the second piece I see a child inside a grownup's mind, longing for the safety of their youth. I think we all wish for this sometimes . . . some have a need for it. But it's logical. What's the saying: I never promised you a rose garden. Life is never simple and grows more complicated as the years go by.

Good writing, Jenna!

Oh, and it's perfectly acceptable to put a poem per page:-) And because this is an open forum, would you mind copywriting your poems?

Like this: © June 2011 by Nobody Special (or your name Jenna) You can grab the © from the bottom of the forum. Just copy and paste:-)

BC
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Re: A few of my pieces

Post  Lucie on Fri Jul 01 2011, 13:00

nice work NS, and a warm welcome to you. Do you have any more?
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Re: A few of my pieces

Post  Jenna French on Fri Jul 01 2011, 14:01

i have a few more to put on

glad u liked them :)
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Re: A few of my pieces

Post  Sue McDonald on Mon Aug 29 2011, 20:55

Beautiful deep writing .....your words really draw me in ! Well done !
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Re: A few of my pieces

Post  Mr Williams on Tue Aug 30 2011, 06:31

Hello Jenna,

I'm Bev's husband, David Williams. Enjoyed your writing and would like to read some more.

God bless,
David
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Re: A few of my pieces

Post  Dori on Fri Sep 02 2011, 18:28

Excellent writing Jenna thanks for sharing them. =)
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