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Post  alitnobani on Tue Jul 05 2011, 16:41

By : Ali Taha Alnobani
With my words
I'm flying now
Catching the theme of the sky
That is scared of the great hijack
Which takes meanings of love
And rolling along the past
That sometimes covers life with blue
And other times with black
When my ideas became so silly
And my memory went back
Those whom I lost were there
Near the indistinct rugged cloud
Laughing with heaven
Crying with Earth
And suffering from lack
Here, alone I can see
Small things with no feelings
Touching the edge of the sag
She travelled with sadness
On her nag
My heart became a word
Just a word written on a rag
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Re: A Word

Post  Lucie on Mon Mar 12 2012, 00:28

really nice friend. I too, often look deep into the sky for inspirational words and lose myself in thoughts of past and future dreams.
Thanks for sharing.



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Re: A Word

Post  alitnobani on Mon Mar 12 2012, 11:40

Thank you my friend BIG hug
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Re: A Word

Post  mikeschultz on Mon Mar 12 2012, 12:50

A wonderful poem of observation and inspiration. Well-worded. Loved the images. You’ve an excellent poem here, one I’m very glad to have had the chance to read. I am most definitely looking forward to your next work. Thank you for sharing. Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven
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Re: A Word

Post  alitnobani on Mon Mar 12 2012, 15:14

It's an honor for me to see your impression. Thank you BIG hug bird bird
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Re: A Word

Post  BC Williams on Mon Mar 12 2012, 15:39

Ali, we do miss you friend! You are missing out on some great poets too . . . Mike is one of a trilogy of wonderful poets here, with Lucie, and her mum, Jinettyx. I know you're busy. Why don't you stop in and tell us all about your life's goings on.

علي، ونحن نفعل اشتقت لك صديق! كنت في عداد المفقودين على بعض الشعراء كبيرة جدا. . . مايك هو واحد من ثلاثية من الشعراء رائع هنا، مع لوسي، وأمها، Jinettyx. أعرف أنك مشغول. لماذا لا توقف في وتخبرنا عن كل ما يجري في حياتك..

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Re: A Word

Post  alitnobani on Mon Mar 12 2012, 15:47

OH my dearest friend Bev . I promise I will return soon when I finish some important things. I miss you too , greetings to all friends group hug give flowers
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Re: A Word

Post  RichieO on Fri Mar 16 2012, 22:41

Well that was a lovely read the sky the limit, I like looking towards the sky can bring on many thoughts within my head so I like to stare to the heavens above.
A very well thought out poem, nice one Like Like Like
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Re: A Word

Post  alitnobani on Sat Mar 17 2012, 08:46

Thank you my friend, How many people around the world may meet our eyes at that moment there at the world of love and peace?!
give flowers deep thought BIG hug
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Re: A Word

Post  Little Owl on Wed Apr 04 2012, 07:10

Ah, to look towards the heavenly skies and lose ourselves in thought. Very well-worded. I like your work.

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