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Post  jinettyx on Wed Feb 29 2012, 14:36

In my Eyes.



In my eyes, she’s really beautiful
In hers, she’ll say she’s not
Her hands are always freezing cold
While mine are always hot.
In my eyes, she is perfect
In hers, she does her best
Until she’s got her household right
She’ll never ever rest.
In my eyes, she’s still my baby
In hers, a hectic mum
A house of demanding children
But still a house of fun.
In my eyes, I adore her
And will until I die
In her eyes, I’m eccentric
But that’s ok….I’ll get by.



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Post  Lucie on Mon Mar 05 2012, 02:47

lovely my darling, lovely. xx
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Post  mikeschultz on Mon Mar 05 2012, 06:38

You've a beautiful and well-presented poem. Thanks for sharing. Very Happy
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Post  jinettyx on Mon Mar 05 2012, 07:56

Thankyou for your warm comments....My girls are all I can think about, they mean so much to me... give flowers
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Post  peewee on Mon Mar 05 2012, 08:43

O God I'm going to cry at this rate
Like a Star @ heaven red star Like a Star @ heaven red star Like a Star @ heaven
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Post  Lucie on Tue Mar 06 2012, 02:53

( sob.. sniff) here's a tissue...... :eejrit:
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Post  Little Owl on Tue Apr 03 2012, 05:07

A mother's love, there is none to compare. It's unconditional for sure. Lovely poem. Makes me want to reach out and hug my daughter but she lives in Maine now with her husband. Again, beautifully written.
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Post  jinettyx on Tue Apr 03 2012, 15:46

Thanks Your comments mean so much. Thankyou for reading. xx
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