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Post  Lucie on Sun Mar 11 2012, 01:54

I was sitting in the parking lot
Me teeth chattering at the root
Whilst the wind whipped up and rocked the car
As though trying to get into the boot.

It whistled and howled through the air vents
And pushed at the doors with its might
It flicked at the wipers and mirrors
Gosh, It put up and incredible fight
It wavered the lamppost before me
As though threatening me out of my seat
All the debris that blew, hit the bonnet
-Which flew o'er two cars in the street!
But i'm sticking it out, for i'm meeting
My Hubby for lunch, in a bit
Not a blustery day could e'er blow me away
For in marriage, I've faced harder ..grit.



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Post  Lucie on Sun Mar 11 2012, 01:54

oops.third line.. *whilst the WIND...*
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Post  Lucie on Sun Mar 11 2012, 01:57

double oops. line twelve..Flew over two OTHER cars ...


OK...quitting!! doh
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Post  BC Williams on Sun Mar 11 2012, 06:44

Well you're just having a heck of a time here aren't ya, lol. Cute. Um . . . you could have just used the Waiting.. I_icon10 button sweetie, but then it is cuter watching you fuss. hug

What was it, a hurricane you were sitting through there? I love storms - til they start looking like they want to turn your car over, lol!

Great active writing Lucie. And the expoundments were very good too:-) Ok...quitting!! doh
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Post  Lucie on Sun Mar 11 2012, 09:05

bless you, Bev.. x
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