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Post  RichieO on Mon Jan 14 2013, 09:14

Dawn. Innocent

Dawn, innocents
Born of a new day
As the sun rises to
Burn away our darkness
Left from the night before.

Dawn, sadness
Leave behind our fears
Of days that have past
Look forward to this
A brand new day

Dawn, hopefulness
A bright new sun
Awakens life’s dreams
So we can live in peace
In the light of the day.

Dawn, happiness
Born this day is a child
Delivered to this world
To bring joy to those
Who love and pray.

Dawn, fearless
Fear not this morn
Embrace its warmth
Let the light take see
And take your fears away.

Dawn, its innocents
The impurity of a
New born day
Let the light shine forth
And bring warmth to your life.


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Post  mikeschultz on Tue Jan 15 2013, 13:35

Richie,

I detect an echo of Emerson as I read of your Days. A very nice poem. I like the repetition of "Dawn" each time bringing us back to the beginning of a new day and each new image you chose to use. Good job.

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Post  RichieO on Tue Jan 15 2013, 16:39

There was a hint Emerson, but to watch a sun rise into the horizon from darkness can make you think of the past, present and future....!
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