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Post  Jenna French on Sat Jul 02 2011, 11:22

If love could hold your hand would you hold mine tight?
If kisses could hug would you hug me all night?
If hugs could hold a heart
Would you hold mine together even if it was falling apart?
If words could make you free
Would I hear you whisper to me?


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Post  BC Williams on Sat Jul 02 2011, 12:59

You really have a knack for this sort of poem, Jenna. I'm wondering something . . . could you write a poem about the perfect sort of man of your dreams?

Good writing, author!

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Post  Jenna French on Sat Jul 02 2011, 17:19

im sure i could give it a go :)
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Post  Jenna French on Sun Jul 03 2011, 13:58

sorted a man of my dreams poem let me know what you think :)
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Post  alitnobani on Tue Jul 12 2011, 12:36

I don't get bored when you talk about love, love is the depth of being here in this stormy world, and it is the secret of happy sadness that colours our poems. nice poem
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Post  Jenna French on Sun Aug 07 2011, 02:36

awww ty very much :)
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Post  peewee on Fri Oct 14 2011, 07:55

Bev's right. You really do have the nack
BUT you must be feeling it to write it. This kind of poetry doesn't just come
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Post  Jenna French on Mon Oct 17 2011, 05:24

to be honest writing like this saves me writing how i really feel x
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